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- February 1, 2020 at 9:51 pm #45119angelGuest
Date: 01 Feb 2020
Module: Academic paper based version
Part 1 Work or study History, if I visit museums to learn more about my country’s history Long/short breaks and which one I prefer If robots and machines are more widely used now than in the past Do I robots and machines be used to replace human jobs? Is it a good thing or a bad thing? Why?
Part 2 A job that I wouldn’t like to do Do many people in my country feel the same way about that job
Part 3 What employers could do to improve employees’ work motivation Are people in my country motivated to work What makes a person hardworking?
Writing task 1: Bar chart on sales of different types of magazine in 1975, 1995 and 2015
Writing task 2 : Opinion essay Too much money is spent on repairing old buildings, instead of repairing old buildings, that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For some reason I suffered a thought block during task 2 completion and I feel that I didn’t develop my ideas well enough, especially in the second body paragraph, although I supported my main point with a clear example and my task 1 was fairly well done.
Do you think task 1 could help offset my somewhat shallow task 2 body paragraph(s) and land me to an overall band 7..? I’m really anxious as I had planned my main points as well as supporting points but I just happened to forget to include some of the supporting points to the actual essay