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A few formal words do not change the overall tone of the letter. There are still many informal elements in the letter such as use of informal phrases like “in the pink of health”, contractions such as “won’t”, and using “Best” as sign off.
Either way is fine as long as you have a clear topic sentence that mentions what the paragraph will be about. eg. On one hand, there are several advantages of xyz. Firstly,… On the other hand, there are some disadvantages too.
The last part of the topic is a bit tricky. After you answer yes or no, you can either give an opinion on whether this is a good trend or a bad trend (the way the model answer does above) or you could give reasons why people are spending more money at these events.
In your 2nd body paragraph , you did mention that people spend…[Read more]